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Hello Rolanda!
Well, first off it's nice to meet you and welcome to the JPIC Community! Secondly, I gotta say I enjoyed this poem a lot because personally I just cannot stand people who lie to me, especially guys, so I could really relate to your poem and what you were saying. I also thought your title was smart and clever because it had me thinking about a '4' letter swear word, and instead it turned out to be a 4 letter word meaning - LIAR.
I love how you play on words with this right here:
Real eyes
Realize
Real lies...
That was interesting to read and play with the sound of how similiar those words were to each other so I enjoyed that. And, overall, I liked reading your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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