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Originally Posted by nature
I am surprised by your reply.the removal of the 'It is' and 'the' are excellent suggestions which were never picked up by anyone else.
A writer cannot see his mistakes and all credit goes to you for the mistake i made in keeping them.
This is the most complex poem of mine and the last two lines were written after I had received answers from my Guru ji: that truth is what you believe relate to you and as you see it.
Quite different it may be universally.
Glad to know you and the brilliance in your understanding.
Thank you from my heart.
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Everyone needs someone who can find what they've missed. I might just be that person for you, lol. I can do that for other people, see where the unnecessary words, the correctly spelled misspelled words are (to = too, form = from etc) and occasionally find a punctuation error. It's much harder to do for myself so I understand where you're coming from.
I'm happy I was able to help you and am blushing at your compliment. I'm here to help and hope that the favor will be returned someday. Pay it forward, find something for someone else which will help that person as this has helped you.
hugs,
Gail
