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Originally Posted by butchiesmom
Umm...is it hot in here or is it just me? Dang, Mysty! I want that quill! Please, pretty please? lol.
Really, I liked this poem. The image of a quill drawing characters with ink, interspersed with, umm, other images (are you sure it's not hot in here?) which are also clear in an opaque, stay outta here, kinda way, is entertaining to say the least.
Plots thicken as blood settles
to pool where society's taboos...
You, ummm, caught my attention with those lines, lol.
Something else caught my attention...for someone's mute, lonely eyes. (just a suggestion)
hugs,
Gail
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Hiya Gail
so hot in here I am going nuts lol. I think the devil's she mistress
musta been whispering in my ear the night I wrote and posted this ..... should I perhaps move it too the adult section? Am glad you liked this and I incorporated your suggestion. Thank You
and Love and
Mysty
