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Wow, this is amazing, Mysty, I love it! I love the sensualness of it (like Gail was saying, is it hot in here? lol.) Definitely very hot and I think it's great the metaphor of you being the Quill, I think this is original and also a strong metaphor as well. I really like how you end it as well restating what you said in the beginning. Anywho, thanks for sharing, and keep on writing away!
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