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Hello Moonchild!
I really like the imagery you have in your poem with the stars, Neptune, and especially the last two lines in the last stanza which kind of reminds me a lot of fall with the wind just becoming soft and mute. Anywho, this is short and sweet poem that packs a lot of imagery and great images in it even though it isn't that long. I enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing!
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