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great last four lines: the simply perfect mess mixed with hope is great evocative moment and then that punch line and you-are less is quite vivid and witty, and perceptive; in fact I think the second stanza is stronger than the first which seems a little disjointed: you talk about two hearts and two reflections, but they're not really delineated.
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