Yxaonidme, I just noticed you were new, so welcome to the forums.
I just wanted to say I enjoyed both of your poems you posted so far, both are very sad and depressing, not that that is a bad thing though. You are young with much gift and talent and I thank you for sharing it with us here in this fine forum.
I write a lot of sad poetry myself as well, based on my life growing up when I was a teenager, because those were very tough years for me, I to have wrote many sucicidal poems and such. It is nice to read someone else's dark poetry though and not just my own.
Now I hope I am not stepping out of line when I say this, but I hope you are not suicidal. When I read your poem it feels like its your feelings speaking, but I could be wrong it could just be a poem that you wrote. Many people including myself have been down that road and its not pretty... Now I am sorry if I went to far or something with what I said, but I have slight worry for you thats all, and I hope you are ok...
Thank you very much for sharing though and I hope to read more by you
