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Real Name: Megan Stanley
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Biography: Hey, so I'm 15, have been writing poetry since I was about in 7th grade, and am just looking for some positive critique. Thanks :)
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Alone in the dust
I've never felt like this before
All my feelings about to pour
Like falling rain, out from the clouds
Feeling like I'm about to drown
But I resist, and resist
For its not worth crying over this
You like her, me, and and maybe even her
Whose to say your feelings for me will conquer?
But I keep hope
All rapped up in this
For all I have
Is one simple wish
Whoever you choose
Whoever you love
That you'll never leave me
Alone in the dust....
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