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Old 10-12-2008, 02:33 AM
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Altree94

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Fantastic! This is a near perfect example of an irregular ode!
Though your anti-strophe seems harsh, the "ing" ending of each line seems to give the whole poem an upbeat tempo! Very well done indeed!



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