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Old 10-09-2006, 01:07 AM
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Altree94

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Very interesting and well-written sonnet! This is one form that I haven't been brave enough to try yet. I like how you made your story-line more real by choosing a cat. No other creature can give you THAT look. With your description of the sun on the glass and holding it, you seem to draw your readers right into the pub with you. Great "hook" lines!
Another enjoyable read - TY for posting!



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