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Real Name: Kimberley D. Robinson
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Join Date: Jun 23 2006
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Biography: Teachers, like candles; consume a little of ourselves everyday, so our students can shine bright.
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Dear Sealiah,
At first I wanted to quote this, then realized I would quote the entire poem!!! This was not an easy read. Very real, very sad. The scribe here, made me misty as a tear beckoned to fall. This is excellent work as far as your craftswoman ship. As far as the little one, or adult in the poem, my heart screams out to that person. If the person is real or not, I would have the same feelings. As Writers, we want to draw our audience into the poem, to feel, and experience the poem. You did just that, and beyond dear Sealiah. There are some poems that stay in you head, and heart, and this is one of them. I can only imagine how many can relate to this piece. Thank you for allowing us to share in this piece Sealiah. Take Care.
Kimberly aka Painted
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