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Originally Posted by Sally Roberts
Waiting For The Light To Change
Too quick to blanket into void
this scene of grief and loss,
Flashed for seconds in the light
on a little wooden cross.
It only takes but moments
for life to end so strange,
And how quickly thoughts will detour
waiting for the light to change.
Sally aka Foresdawn
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Dear Ms Roberts,
What a different concept you have woven into your canvas. I like the fact that you took something we wait for everyday, several times a day (may even take for granted), as waiting for the light to change. Then, incorporate this with precious moments of life, life that can change at any moment, and never come back, yet the light will continue to change. The rhyme and meter in this was right on point. This was a heartfelt piece in addition to the beautiful form it portrays. Lovely..... Thank you for sharing.
Painted Diary aka Kimberly
