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Real Name: Kimberley D. Robinson
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Dear Ms Stardust,
I am not sure where to begin. In terms of your craftswoman ship, and the art of story writing, this is an EXCELLENT WRITE!! However, I cannot help being saddened by the true facts that were the bases of this story. Quite Chilling I might say , or to say the least. I would like to know, what kind of place was this, that Gladys was living in? Why was Gladys there after Ivonne, or was Gladys there just to investigate? Why would Gladys' vocal chords would be sliced, if she dared to brake the rules? Also, why would Gladys have liked to shatter the silence? What does Gladys know? What were the rules, and who's rules? Why did Gladys anger Ivonne so? Did they (Ivonne and Gladys) have a prior history before Ivonne took her life? I am very intrigued by this story Ms Starry, so please do tell......
Painted
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