Hi METRICAL - 1st Welcome to JPiC - I had to do a bit of magic to find your email address

But it seems like this is an amazing find - Highly trained in the art of poesy - AND blessing us with a beautiful sonnet

((you may want to repost just the piece itself in the Creative Traditional section within the
Poetic Colours forum))
2nd - I'm liking the style of your poem - Though it is of a very cynical nature - the language you've used is just so beautiful. Very well thought-out and nice read!
Again WELCOME - I'm sure you'll just love it here
Jacquii.
btw - favorite lines from your piece spell out the word HOW:
Quote:
How can this one be saved from being all lost
Or doomed in life to have no sure success
When he is both in sunshine and in frost,
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Very interesting question within your writing - I wonder if you have an answer?