Hey Jonny!
Glad to have a poet of such skill joining us here! If you like different poetic forms, you've really come to the right place!
I went first to the Acrostic Intoduction Game that I started, then I realized that you must have posted your acrostic here! If you like challenges, try another one for the game, using "MetricalSonneteer"!
And don't be so harsh on yourself! LOL! It is quite obvious that you have a lot of talent and as you get to know your way around the forum, you'll be blooming in no time!
- Tree.