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Hey Sweetie!
You didn't have to edit just for me! (I am glad you thought of me though!) If it helps you feel better, you just go ahead and write any damn thing you want!
I was also much relieved that this is an OLD one! That seems to imply that things have gotten better for you since I have found you again, and there is no way I'm ever going to lose you again!
I liked Erik's comments - although I don't agree that it should have a more specific target. He saw it as targeting the reader. I see it as ranting against the world in general and maybe against God as well. This is the Rant Room after all, and a good rant can lose something if you get too explicit with the details.
So write on, Sweetie, and do whatever you gotta do to get rid of the crap and move on!
LYL,
Auntie Tree.
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