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yes serenity i'm glad your not upset by my comments some people can be rather defensive about their poetry, my only point is you should make it clearer that God's the target which can easily be done, I took it as a poem not rant as it had qualities of apoem mostly, with rants in between lines,
but this side is usually a hidden side of most people, but if its really how you feel it might be the most constructive and entertaining(for me) way to get it out so in mind mind this poem was top-notch
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