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10-22-2006, 09:13 AM

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Yes MARK - this is a superb write... Ever since I've done the Poetry-Defined section I've earned and/or been rewarded with a very deep respect for "traditional" styles and this sonnet is very beautifully written!

His family and friends would be aghast
to hear their wrinkled sage bay at the moon
and warble that he'd found “the one” at last,
and call him “fool”, or worse, “romantic loon.”

I think you doth speak of me in those lines LOL - Very nice piece of writing - Thanx for the sharing and again.... Welcome to the Community

Jacquii.

[Edited - just reread the title DIAGNOSTIC.... Genius!]

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