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Old 10-24-2006, 10:54 PM
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Erik! Hehehe I know ABSOLUTELY NOTHING about American politics, except who Bush is - and thats just because he's always on OUR tv too! But I enjoyed this piece, and smiled throughout!

I search for kids who that look like Harry Potter <- I tripped there, what's that line mean? "who that" is a strange word combination...

every mom knows who needs Halloween,
when their kids already a goth or ghoul, <-positively inspiring!

things have gotten rather wacky,
as the least popular President ever,
wants to be President forever. <-just... awesome!

Overall Erik, just a couple typos (for example, "instaed") that should be fixed... But nonetheless, another great write! Now I'm thinking I should try this out.... ehehe

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