KingAce

Ok so here's the deal...I been on a few times but I only read poems and not given feedback and this poem sorta explains part of the story why...I;m sorry to everybody; I just have a lot of trouble with my moods and emotions i'm so sorry but here's a sample of what I been feelin lately

A ChanceA

Chance is merely the door of opportunity being opened,
Opened up to enter the home where the heart lies,
The heart lies in the stillness of lonely,
Lonely...
Love has become but a word,
A word no longer with meaning or emotion,
Emotion that is immeasurable but most important uncontrollable,
Uncontrollable to the manipulations of distrust,
Distrust that befalls upon one's soul,
One's soul is but disgrace's folly,
Folly of horseplay due to past trials,
Trials of adversity that swell the knot in your throat,
Your throat is choked by deceit,
Deceit, lies, lost passion and overall gloom,
Gloom in your eyes nudging tears to the brink of heavy lashes,
Heavy lashes lacerate repeatedly upon the mind,
The mind...
Shadows cast upon your hopes, dreams, but not faith,
Faith solely treads with double taps as it fades,
Fades from existence,
Existence...
My prayers ascend to the pearly, gold laced gates of heaven,
"Dear lord, I wish to you in silence that better days shall greet me openly
A fair chance, possibility, one shot to gain one who shares equal emotions,
I sacrifice my being to those who continue to believe in love,
I shed the very tear of love that jesus wept for his children,
May you aid me to spread my wings,
Wings of chance to give to those the omnipotent power of true love,
In your name rests my spirit until my Angel finally coincides,
Coincides with me as I bid farewell,
One last long sigh to love,
Injury is for you to intake, the suffering will tend to me,
For me it is hopeless to encounter love justly and still sustain its melody
To a hopeful heart, when love dies, the past dies and they move on,
To my heart, when love dies, the future dies...Forever;