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Old 11-22-2006, 12:27 AM
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Love lost

Love lost
Anothers gain
The pain hails down like torrential rains
Tears, once distant in my memory
Now occur more often than smiles do
I still remember my I love yous
The confession I made at the altar
Has now been altered since you've changed
Funny how instead of love, only hatred we now exchange
Love costs nothing except commitment and trust
Love sometimes is confused with infatuation and lust
We, sold our soul to great sex and a weakened promise
Who thought that two experts in life could ever be novice
My problem was that I neglected to look at your faults
And You neglected mines
We thought that a wish would stand the test of times
We thought our freestyles could stand the best of rhymes
But our metaphors and similes, were too easy for comprehension
Thought we had an intergalactic vibe, now its lost in a 3rd dimension
You were once my exclamation, now you're the period at the end my sentence.
No vengeance, no vendetta
No quotes, no love letters
Only salutations and hope you betters
Maybe next time we'll both be clever...
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