Hi there Gemini! First I'd like to take a minute to say WELCOME to JPiC! - haven't seen you around yet - have you
introduced yourself yet? If not, please do!
And, what a wonderful poem! Some very intense images here =) I especially loved this part:
Quote:
Have you found your way and feel confused,
Arrive on time and feel too late,
Accepted life and yet refused,
Feel the love while filled with hate?
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The only thing is - there seems to be a style at first, but near the end of the poem it breaks down - was this intentional? Either way, very nice piece! Great write, thanks for sharing!! =)
Smiles!,
~Serenity~
