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critique
(Loudly, clearing throat to get painted's and tree's attention) I did say I didn't like this poem but Tree talked me out of using the delete button, lol.
Please read Jacquii critique and you'll see why I was so unsure of this one. She pointed out all the problems I couldn't voice with it.
Anyway, lol. Thanks Painted and Tree for the praise, it saved the life of this storem, and Jacquii for further giving it a longer life, lol.
Now that I can see what bothered me about it I can do something to fix it.
Gail
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