tasvik

Hey!
As a beginner i realise there's lots of improvement needed in my work. Another reason is that my native speech isn't english, so in my regret, i think i use a lot of cliche (wrong?) language.
So, i hope i can find some critiques in here, i'd love to grow in this.
Thanks in advance!

Greetings,
tasvik


Life's password


Still, you're sitting still, thinking
tell me about what, are your hopes sinking
did you figure it out, life's password
'cause to me, you're owning so many answers

I'd like to talk to you about forever
how these hands of yours still make it matter
you stretch them out to help us stand
tearing you down, you stretch them out again

Running isn't for you anymore
tired of keeping you're eyes on the backdoor
without a fight, you let the bomb blast
figuring this cut fades out the last

You ask me what i dream, it's you
my guidance, untouchable, but i grew
Angry, you let them take you away
I'm not prepared to loose you one day

Running isn't for you anymore
tired of keeping you're eyes on the backdoor
without a fight, you let the bomb blast
figuring this cut fades out the last