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Old 12-04-2006, 05:44 PM
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Hey, thanks very much for the answer, Alan. It's really great. All the punctuations, i find it hard to use them in a poem. But it makes the reading easier.

The meaning of this sentence:

without a fight, you let the bomb blast,
figuring this cut fades out the last.

Well, bad things keep on happening with this person, he end up getting hurt all the time. Because he doesn't want to make things worse, he lets it happen. But you know when, for example, you have a sentence in your finger. When you pinch yourself real hard, the sentence won't hurt so much anymore. It's kind like that, but mentally.

Thanks, again, also to Lanai

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