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ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty
Last Online: 12-13-2008 10:08 AM
Location: Sussex, England
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Biography: Father of five, Grumps to two, I've been writing poetry since '93, and also love helping other poets
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EXCHANGE BY WAY OF CRITIQUE
Dear Lanaia,
THESE are the rules of this forum :
Guidelines:
1. No one-word comments in this section please - Critique the poem and offer ideas for improvement
2. Do NOT post in this section if you ONLY want praise for your work - Find a more appropriate section for your work if that's the case.
3. Comment whilst offering suggestions you think may improve the writers' work
4. Have fun being creative and helping out your poetic peer!
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Please note that your "crit" of "ERRANT SCALPEL", while not a ONE-word comment, in that it is 2 words, hardly qualifies as "crit", and here, as elsewhere on the net, you are hardly exchanging with the poets whom you expect to wade through your lengthy offerings.
Please abide by the rules of this forum, GIVE as well as take. I think that if you do, you will find others much more willing to give to you in return.
Thank you
Alan
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