Hey NIKOS - I see this writing as more of an essay actually - Doesn't seem like a poem - but more prose.
I do like the idea of writing from an original point-of-view with personal style:
Quote:
... "You walk in smiling,
dressed in red, and carrying hope for my eyes in yours”—
it means the same thing and sounds better and
has images. Do not be afraid of prosaic style...
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At anyrate - moving to Miscellaneous. But truly thanx for sharing this piece - Perhaps you will let us know if this is meant as a poem OR more as a tutorial-type piece.
Thanx for sharing it with us AND Welcome to JPiC
Jacquii.
