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12-07-2006, 08:36 AM

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Originally Posted by butchiesmom

Jacquii, I printed out your helpful suggestions and was telling my hubby about it when I read this one line you suggested:
I walk liltingly in those high-heeled shoes,

I had to laugh out loud and so did my husband, lol. He said tiltingly would be more apt, lmao. Even when I weighed around 100 pounds, when I walked down a hallway in heels, it sounded like a much larger person, lol. Thanks for the idea though, lol.

LOL - The world still ain't ready for me to try highheels LOL

Jacquii

ps - glad the suggestions help - I look forward to that 1st revision!

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