- Dishonored Temple
- Love at first sight - need majpr critique
- He Strolled By
- Lunar Deity
- Senryu series
- Beautiful Train
- Legacy of Paradox 2 re-edited
- Ambiguity Reigneth
- The Epic (revised)
- That Will Be Me
- I Need revision 11-12-06
- Where Is The Joy? **Revision #2**
- My Dream (Revised)11/06)
- Discrimination(1st draft)
- Where Is The Joy? (1st revision)
- You've Got Mail {Flash Fiction}
- Little Brown Girls' (Journey from Tragedy to Spirituality)-Revision #1
- Saxophone Love VIII - Revision #1
- The Chain
- Saxophone Love V
- My Dream
- Saxophone Love VI--Revision #1
- *RULES* for the Revisions *READ BEFORE POSTING*
- Stolen Moments (revised) Yikes critique please