Wow! So much going on in this poem - You spoken on some tough topics and espoused some often hard-to-swallow bitter truth. Definitely a thought provoking write. Thanx for the share and Welcome to JPiC Forum.

Jacquii.

btw - You may find the best place to post your poems will be in the Poetic Colours section on the Main Forum Index... Also - feel free to introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section

When Kim referred to this blog entry in the Shoutbox, I knew I had to check it out. What it did was fire my imagination and rile me. I was writing a comment on this entry, which by the way I find truthful, when I realized I was writing a freakin essay instead, so I pulled it out of here, into Word and finished it, I think. Because it's the most controversial, to me, essay I'd written, I sent it to you for your response and your thoughts on posting it. Well, I have and entitled it, Speak Up! http://jpicforum.info/essays/speak-u...html#post37764.

I'm hoping everyone will add their voices to this essay. Speak up! Be heard!

Thank you, MsJ for posting this thoughtful, inspuring blog entry.

hugs,
Gail