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2 Haikus
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No stars in the sky
The city makes sure of that.
Still,a nice night,though.
My love is so strong
And ready to share always.
She is my desire.
Spencer McCartney(Real:Kevin Miller)
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No stars in the sky
The city makes sure of that.
Still,a nice night,though.
My love is so strong
And ready to share always.
She is my desire.
Spencer McCartney(Real:Kevin Miller)
shakespeare14
Dear Shakespeare,
I love both of these Haikus. They are simply beautiful. The first is very well written, and just because there is light pollution, does not mean it is not a nice night. Love that concept!! The next is quite dreamy, and romantic. One can feel the love. The last line is fabulous!!! Loved them. Keep em' comin'!! LOL
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First,allow me to say to you that You Are Very Welcome! I've always Loved Haikus,they're short,sweet and don't require rhymes.As most people(if not all of us)
know how difficult,even just a little difficult,rhyming our Poems.Except maybe for those
with extensive vocabulary.Anyway,lately,I've discovered how much I Love Japan and
wish I could Love it in person.And Haikus are the first pieces of literature I Loved that
come from that country.
Second,I owe you my own thanks for your Good Words of Praise and Encouragement.
Those are the things we Writers of Poetry and even Stories,Love the Most! The money is nice,for those who are published,but the Praise and Encouragement is what we Truly Love the Most,even over the money.Without those things,the money is but a Shallow thing at best.Thank you again,My Friend.
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shakespeare14, you started with a bang. These are lovely haikus...very timeless...nature and love...always prevailing over all.
thanks for sharing
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i've always
been fascinated the eastern genres of ku', what you composed was definately more contemporary in form & i enjoyed both equally. keep doing your thing artist. one-
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LOL - love the enthusiasm SHAKESPEARE - But yeah - your haiku have more of a modern/contemporary approach. The 1st is very nice actually - inspires a sense of trepidation really... First thing I asked myself is what or WHO would seek to dim the stars? Seems a bit of a riddle actually.
The 2nd haiku is actually more of senryu in that it speaks on the human essense rather than nature - At anyrate - I enjoyed it also, as I'm always a fan of love
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My 2 Haikus
shakespeare14, you started with a bang. These are lovely haikus...very timeless...nature and love...always prevailing over all.
