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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 11-27-2006, 02:26 AM
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Spent, entwined,
savoring sweet sweat's
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Totally AWESOME!
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After WHAT???!!!
oh, nevermind.
LOL!
Hi Benny! - Though this does not follow the traditional form, it is still a most excellent haiku! Love that alliteration!



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a great read
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I'm sure Benny is talking about cutting out the old choko vine in the back yard. Hard yakka mate. Just joking.

Enjoyed the read Benny.
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Uh...yeah, Merv...lol. Thanks for reading my poem.
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