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Old 06-08-2007, 02:09 PM
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All I Want
Adulation,
Laudation,
Lionization.

If that is why we write

We've surely lost our soul.
All I want to do is write,
Not ask that you extol,
Treasure or indict,

In any way, my word.
So go ahead and say

That you have been angered,
Or I have brightened up your day

With all my views on life.
Remember though, my friend,
It matters what you see,
That in the end,
Each word I write - is me.
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Terrence that matters the utmost,

a great poem you used some word I'm unfamiliar with which made it fun,

enjoy these 5 stars the star attraction your poem today



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Dear Terence,

I have read your poetry, and am now catching up on my commenting, and this is the first. You write with strength, and a catalyst that screams attention. You are very gifted dear, and I love this poem here. You inspire me as well. Keep'm comin!!! Love your work, and again to the community!

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very nice!
wow......

VERY nice Acrostic...
sometimes it is hard to break from the stereotype because it is used in younger school...lol and we all butchered it then.

nice job!



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Old 06-10-2007, 03:26 PM
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Thank you, erik, for the rating and lovely response. I'm pleased you enjoyed this, as is my aim.

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Dear Kimberly, I appreciate your kind words very much, and thank you for that great welcome.

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Hi, Anna, thanks for your thoughts. Poetry was not something I was introduced to at an early school, I'm pleased that you have the opportunity as you are obviously headed for greater things with your own writing.

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Hey TERENCE - very strong write! I like how the piece speaks "This is me and always gon' be me - If you don't like it.... F**K off!" But only in an eloquent manner --- I love the unapologetic honesty of your poem. Very nice write!

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