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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)
a modified haiku?

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Old 03-28-2007, 08:44 PM
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At the mountain stream,
you never looked so alone,
nor so beautiful.
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soft and beautiful...like seeing her mirror image in the laughing stream...wow.
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What powerful words on such a small canvas. The image it portrays is memorable, and the ink is still drying in my mind. More.....!!!!!!Loved it!!!!

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thank you benny.....and painted.

I just wanted to capture a single woman, standing alone with God, facing a mountain stream.

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At the mountain stream,
you never looked so alone,
nor so beautiful.
WHOA! This one hit me like a ton of bricks!
Powerful powerful haiku ---- reminds me of one of my most favorite quotes on the JPiC Live Quote system:

The thing that makes you exceptional, if you are at all,
is inevitably that which must also make you lonely.

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Brillianly written DAZ and thoroughly enjoyable!
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Short and full of love.
Just these lines let
you feel what love brings.
Nice and sweet.



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truly
a sensual canvas artist. luv when one can say soooo much in so little space yeah. one-
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