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Old 10-08-2006, 11:45 PM
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With needle-like fangs and razor claws,
her nails-on-chalkboard voice,
she flies through the air so gracefully,
that I simply have no choice,
but to admire all her beauty,
her style and her flaws,
while ignoring some of the havoc
and the chaos she can cause!

She has a big Lab quaking with fear,
a rottweiler in distress.
A heavy boxer pussyfoots by,
it makes me laugh, I confess.
For she only weighs twelve pounds or so,
all of it is attitude.
She's feisty and mean, finicky too
sometimes nice, but mostly rude!

Her walk is a strut, a proudful prance!
Her haughty glare says it all!
She's the ultimate of drama queens,
and only ten inches tall.
Although she bites me, still I love her,
if you can imagine that!
There's been many times, I've had this wish,
that I could someday speak CAT!


Since my Poll about pets has been going so well, I thought you all might like to hear about my Sassy-cat!



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Old 10-09-2006, 12:47 AM
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hehe i knew before i even finished - it had to be Sassy! great poem - as always i especially love the playful rhythm and how you wrapped it all up at the very end - keeps ya guessing

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TY Sweetie! Your comments on my stuff wouldn't happen to be just the littlest bit biased now, would they?! LOL! TTYL!



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Dear Ms Tree,

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!! How did I not see this before!!! This is fantastic!!!!!! Everything about this poem is simply purrrr-fect! Let me know, if you ever break through and speak CAT!!!!!!! LOL!!!! The title and poem are such a unique combination. I never would have thought, that a poem about a cat would follow!!! I love the ending Ms Tree. You are a wonderful writer, and your range of diverse poetic writings shines through beautifully. This poem has all the right ingredients... humor, charm, cleverness, perfect meter, perfect rhyme, and oh boy, I could go on, and on! Bravo, my friend, bravo! You have done it once again!

P.S. I hope you feel better.....

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Hello Tree!! WOW!! WOW!! Your Poem is Awesome, dear!! I love CATS!! So, I love your PERFECT POEM. Where did you learn how to write so well, sweetheart?? I just can´t believe my eyes, to read how much beauty and perfection that come out of your Poem!! Your vocabulary is Outstanding!! I love it, with all my heart!! Tell your Cat that, I said "I love you, kitty!!" Hugs. Loving and Caring Always, from Stardust.
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TY, PD! TY Starry!
Wow - you two have me blushing!

I just wanted to describe my Sassy-cat so that others could get a mental picture of her. She's nearly 15 years old now and still thinks she's a kitten. I'm trying real hard to be just like her! She was born on my birthday and I'm pretty sure that she's used up 8 of her lives so far. She's the only one of my many pets that has been with me since birth. From your comments I guess I succeeded in letting everyone know how much I love her!
Thanks again, to both of you for your comments! Now I'm just wondering if my helmet is still going to fit! LOL!



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Hi, Tree.

I like your cat poem - especially the "nails-on-chalkboard voice".

I can hear it!
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