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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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I want to tell you I'm alright but it seems you can't hear me talk
You seem to be crying while saying my name
But I can't make you hear me no matter how loud I talk
Everything seems to have change, nothing at all seems the same.

I see someone lying on a bed that looks like me
The poor person lying there seems to be dead
I can't understand why you are crying saying my name,see
I'm trying to let you know I am here but you can't hear anything I have said.

Something strange, it seems I am looking down on all this
So how does one hover over others and not be seen or heard?
Death? Did this hideous thing find me to kiss?
This just can't be I need to stop being absurd.

If I have graduated to another plane it would explain all
But this just can't be! It's to bizarre to be true!
I'm aware of everything and all
But no one knows I'm here, so it must be true.

It all makes sense now, I have traveled to a different dimension
I just wish I could let you know that I am all right
See I finally realize the person on the bed is me
To stay alive I no longer have to fight.
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