lanaia74

I am totally intoxicated by your presence
When you are in my line of sight, I can't help myself, I would do anything
From the day I met you, my mind hasn't been right since
I thought I would never meet anyone to which forever I wanted to cling.

When I look into your eyes, I fall completely under your spell
Anything you tell me to do, I have to obey your every whim
I know your sweet face, I have memorized every detail
I will follow you any where, even into the darkness that is so grim.

The last few times we were together, I can't remember too well
But since then I have to totally obey you
For the past week or so I haven't felt to well
Why this is going on I haven't a clue.

But I tend to perk up when I see your smiling face
You are the most wonderful happening in my life
I want to forever remain by your side, I wouldn't be happy any other place
I was very startled when you ask me to be your wife.

For you, my love, within my power I would do anything
We must drink to our engagement, You say," I already have a bottle."
You have made me so happy, I feel as if I could sing
The liquid from the bottle is thick, rich, and red, and I watch you as you pour making sure you don't fill my glass too full.

KingAce

This is very interesting because it's like a short story but the conclusion of what happens in the story is left open in my opinion, I like the way things started almost from scratch and then fell for just a stanza or so then from there was another climax that ended with you being on cloud nine....I liked this itz like a fairy tale type story but it is also very realistic; Thank You

Benny

Ummmm....dom/sub? Lots of images offered here in this work...visuals open and I like that. Another work lies in this one, I am certain...