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Old 06-21-2007, 10:23 AM
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distant train whistles
midnight rain falls
footsteps echo
on damp asphalt



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you make haikus absolutely addictive,

so short but you make them have such a deeper meaning,
I feel this one was perfect



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Old 06-21-2007, 07:13 PM
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Hey Lisa

this is very visually penned, nice work!

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Hey Erik,


thanks so much for your kind remarks



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Old 06-22-2007, 12:04 AM
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Hello there Harry


I appreciate your kind comments about my haiku


hope to talk with you soon



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Old 06-23-2007, 02:02 AM
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I appreciate your kind comments about my haiku


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your welcome Lisa


so good to read your words again

hope you'll post more here again

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Great Visuals and style~!~!
Loved It~!~!
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Merry Meet Lisa:

Your haiku is flawless! I tried writing Haiku but found myself trying to add more to them. I love reading them but I tend to write longer poetry and find it difficult writing the shorter ones. Yet I challenge myself to all types of poetry.

Thanks for sharing. I am looking forward in reading more of your work.

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