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Old 12-04-2006, 03:12 AM
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AWAKENING - Haiku

awakening sun
beams through open window
alarm clock sounds



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excellent job

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Old 12-04-2006, 03:59 PM
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Hi Echoes!! I love it!!

I hit snooze again
Close the curtain from the Sun
Back to sleep I go!


LOL, just wanted you to smile!

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Old 12-05-2006, 04:27 AM
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you're welcome Lisa
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Hi Painted

that is funny, I like your take on it

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If there is any form of poetry that I LOVE...it's haiku. To use such few words and still be able to convey beauty to my mind and heart is a wonderful thing. Reading this made me think of how I woke up yesterday morning. It was soo beautiful and calming, yet exilerating. Nothing like waking up in the morning to the sun beaming on your face...bright light is the best way to awaken...but then agin there is that alarm clock that for a moment disturbs your peace, makes the oh so melodic tunes in your mind(morning sound track) stop...but the best pert is gazing back into the beautiful morning sun after handling the distraction....thanking God for another day of life.....BEAUTIFUL write Echoes



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Hi Ladylyric

thank you so much for your kind response to my haiku

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I really loved this Haiku.
I've never needed an alarm clock. I just tell myself what time to wake up and I do.
The sun casting it's light into the window is so beautiful.
Thanks for sharing
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