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Old 12-10-2006, 10:47 AM
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This is a difficult form to write without falling into the abyss of disassociated lines. You have done it well and told a story through form and image. Nice job!
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Old 12-10-2006, 11:50 AM
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you're welcome echoes, well deserved!

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Old 12-10-2006, 06:48 PM
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wow, Lisa this is a fine example of a nonet, as Sid said these are diffulcult to write and you did a fantastic job with this form

Lisa, I agree with you about that one line, maybe it should be changed to " wanton body" but it works it either way
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you are quite welcome, much deserved!

have a great week!

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Old 12-11-2006, 01:45 AM
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This is a difficult form to write without falling into the abyss of disassociated lines. You have done it well and told a story through form and image. Nice job!
:word_thankyou: Sid, I appreciate your kind thoughts



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wow, Lisa this is a fine example of a nonet, as Sid said these are diffulcult to write and you did a fantastic job with this form

Lisa, I agree with you about that one line, maybe it should be changed to " wanton body" but it works it either way

:word_thankyou: Harry, your comments always mean much to me, thanks for the read

I am still thinking on that line change



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Old 12-11-2006, 01:52 AM
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you are quite welcome, much deserved!

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again sage and you have a great week too



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Harry, I changed that one line...what do you think?

:word_thankyou: for all your help

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Harry, I changed that one line...what do you think?

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I like the change, good job
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