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Old 11-25-2006, 03:47 PM
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Children's poem- Snow Angels

keep with you,
the imprint for when you,
might image,
the light shining down,
have you ever seen one on the ground?

always remember,
angels best like December,
when little hearts warm up to snow,
and ice skaters and carolers crow,

As much as you feel
so youthful recall,
the winter used to damper your mood,
staying inside was not for you,
so you made a snowman,
sledded and made due,
winter in your heart grew,

Why are their snow angels you once asked,
to spread cheer to little children and you realized then
angels were affecting you,

Snow angels come from the part of heaven,
where all our dreams grow,
sometimes they are crystals that fall with the snow,
sometimes they are whole,

So if an angel you make in a yard,
leave it a place to show,
as you might come to see a real snow angel at your door.
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Very well put...wish I had done this one, Erik...lol I love the way you've made it a child's gift of sorts...the snow angels...Christmas is for children as a teaching opportunity...I LIke THIS ONE.
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Very nice, Erik! We forget sometimes, the fun we had as children and then we see them doing the same things we did when we were still young and innocent. It's a great feeling and this poem brought it all back! TY for posting!



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yeah Benny soem kids learn allot from Christams most learn the words gimme gimme gimme and don't forget them once until they die,

thanks Benny I usually dont' write for children but sinmce i've been on thsis ite I've doen allot fo thing that aren't normal for me
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wow I brought it all back that's loevly the power of words I suppose thanks allot tree
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