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Old 09-04-2007, 02:52 PM
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Moonlight
Casting white light
Upon the shadowed lawn
While peeking through the leafy limbs
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Old 09-12-2007, 05:16 AM
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~JASMINE~

Blooming
jasmines perfume
summers midnight aura
as yellow petals kiss the moon
waxing.

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Old 11-12-2007, 12:14 AM
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WOW nice poems everyone!
I think I'll try one :]

Believe
when all seems lost
when all is without hope
when all others give up trying
hang on



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Old 11-12-2007, 12:18 AM
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hmm. another one?


Forgive
easy to say,
but always hard to do.
It is hard to cast off the hurt,
but try.


sorry. I've been having a hard time forgiving and talking to someone...



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The bed
where once we slept
no longer holds your shape...
did you think my heart would hold it
longer?

First appeared in Modern English Tanka - Vol. 2, No. 2 . (covering my copy-righted behind!)

Cinquain are really an amazing form. They force you to think through your ideas and choose your words carefully. I like your saxaphone, Painted Diary! Sartor--"full moon" was beautiful! (And so are everyone else's! I was just a ditz and posted after reading the first page.)
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The bed
where once we slept
no longer holds your shape...
did you think my heart would hold it
longer?

Cinquain are really an amazing form. They force you to think through your ideas and choose your words carefully. I like your saxaphone, Painted Diary! Sartor--"full moon" was beautiful! (And so are everyone else's! I was just a ditz and posted after reading the first page.)
Bitter Irony! That was so amazing...to think...yes....no longer holds your shape...just wow! Thank you for reading my Saxquain also, lol...you are are so right about this form...Cinquains do force one to express often like not before. Additionally, word selection based on syllable count may seem restrictive for some, however, it forces one to creative heights! Best of luck on your mag as well!

Beautiful Cinquains everyone!!!!!

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Forever and always Mr.Sartor, I'll always enjoy your works. This one you have written here, is one more reason why!



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