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Old 01-11-2007, 11:14 AM
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CINQUAIN...anyone?

Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.





Cinquain Sunset
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Sunset,
Gold melted red,
Sinking into the sea,
Night covers the world with darkness,
Day ends.
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Dear Sartor,

This was simply exquisite, and a fine example of this beautiful poetic form. Tis one of my favorites poetic forms, and the one you shared did wonders for my affective domain, and aesthetic visual domain....thank you. Fantabulous!!!

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Oh no ya don't Painted............you don't get away without writing one here............Heh-heh..........I will be looking for it.



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Pale dawn,
changing to rose,
that blooms into blood-red.
Giving birth to another day
Morning.



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Great work
from a poet
whose words I love to read.
Well-written, good imagery,
Sartor!

And that goes for both of them!



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And thee?
Sunset, tea-glee
Fabulosity? And
left me longing such poetry:
Sartor.

Untitled piece about the one who actually dared MsJacquiiC
Nice form! ALSO - thought I'd make it kinda rhyme...

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Smiles for both of you.......Altree and Jacquii. Thanks for your cinquains. I enjoyed them.

full Moon
riding the clouds
pale green her beauty glows
reflecting glory of her Love
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Dear Sartor,

You make the Cinquain so effortless.....Ms Tree's and Ms Jacquii's are beautiful as well. Whew...don't know if I can measure up to you three!!!! You three put me to shame!!! I have a hard time trying to write Haiku's!!! LOL....


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