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Old 10-24-2006, 06:24 AM
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Come With Me

Come take my hand and I will take you away
To a land beyond sickness and pain
I will be your best friend, please let me stay
I will make you free as a horse's mane.

Come away with me
To the land beyond all logic
I promise you will be happy, just wait and see
Away from all the world's evil so thick.

Come with me ecstatic you will be
No more will you play life's devastating game
I will deliver you from life's bloody sea
You have everything to gain.

Come with me I offer you peace
You will never again have to play lif'e's confusing game
Don't be afraid I'm not a beast
I'm just a part of life for that me you can't blame.

Come with me and I shall set you free
Away for life's turmoil
Because, I death, will always be
I will choke out your life, for that makes me royal.
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Old 10-25-2006, 01:57 AM
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Just aren't keen on
doing that at this stage
there Lanaia 74, think
'll stay a while longer
if you don't mind.

LOL, Thanks for the
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