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Crimson Snow
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Hush now darling, hurry to sleep,
There’s someone you’ve been wanting to meet,
Drift off now, to your crimson dreams,
Hug your little teddy, torn at its seams,
Wake wake now, Its finally begun,
Trapped in your dreams, there’s nowhere to run,
Crimson snow falling gentley overhead,
We all know that soon you’ll be dead,
Wander endlessly, there’s nowhere to go,
From the gray sky falls crimson snow,
Here there’s no such thing as a garden of roses,
Grab your gun and make suicidal poses,
Everything you touch turns to ash,
Snow building up on the eye of your lash,
Tormented by nightmares, haunted by life,
You know the only way out is the knife,
Trembling and cold, you try to awake,
To go back and live a life so fake,
A deceiving smile, secrets you keep,
The wounds in your heart are just too deep,
Please don’t struggle, Please don’t fight,
I promise you my dear it’ll be alright,
There we go, make bigger gashes,
Snow falling on all of your lashes,
Bleed crimson like the tainted snow,
Heaven isn’t where good girls go,
It’s all a lie, none of it’s true,
Life was a lie but you already knew,
Now that you’re dying you feel love,
Your bed drenched in crimson blood,
Hold on to teddy, hold him tight,
I told you everything would be alright,
Your dreams start fading as the blood flows,
When your life is hell this is how the end goes,
But still you smile, Can you tell me why?
When now you should be saying your final goodbye,
Ohh it’s too late, your heart has stopped,
And from your hand the knife has dropped,
Now teddy’s alone, poor little bear,
He was the only one that truly did care…
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Oh, man, all these suicide pieces are so sad. Brings hopelessness to a whole new level when it ends like this. Very gripping piece...I had to read it twice...superb rhyming and beat!
Wow, and now for something completely different....
How did I miss this one? Fantastic.. I've been readin' your poetry and all I can say is...Gripping, Flowing, Realistic and Amazing - oh, did I say wow......
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