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Old 02-28-2008, 11:54 AM
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Evolve
The echoes sound
Through the ages of man
New age dawns as the world is one
Slowly the forming of
Global mankind
Revolves
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Kit, I love this poem...it reminds me of standing way, way up on the edge of a cliff, alone and in absolute silence, watching the sun come up on the morning...as little by little the world comes alive. It's a very deeply thought out piece, reaching back through the ages of our beginnings.

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Kit, I love this poem...it reminds me of standing way, way up on the edge of a cliff, alone and in absolute silence, watching the sun come up on the morning...as little by little the world comes alive. It's a very deeply thought out piece, reaching back through the ages of our beginnings.

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Perfect image for this poem! Imagine all of mankind through the ages standing on that edge, alone...and what is the fundamental change today? We can join hands and link together and watch the sunrise on a new age together in a way that no other generation ever could. Thanks for seeing that and providing the extra image.



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Speaks truth and well spoken.
Excellent Rictameter Kit, much enjoyed!



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I really like the message of that!



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