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Beauty waits in anxious zeal

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Old 06-20-2007, 08:28 PM
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Dawning Into The Night
On this earth
we call a sphere,
Within the northern
hemisphere,
multitudes of
colors bright
perform like prisms
in the night.

Rainbow bands
of painted streams
ever changing
so it seems.
In the darkest
space and ballast
oh, Aurora Borealis.

Beauty waits
in anxious zeal
for evening's fall,
and all is still.
Then earthly wonders,
splendor bright,
create a dawning
into the night.



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this poem was glorious eye catching



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Old 06-21-2007, 07:53 PM
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Thank You Erik:
As usual your comments are greatly appreciated.

Although I have never been up north in the state of Alaska, where the Northern lights perform their brilliantly colored light show, I've seen them on a special television documentary. To see them in person would be a wonderous treat though I'm sure.

Is there has been anyone here who has actually seen the Northern lights? I would sure like to know how you felt about your wonderful experience(s).

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Dear Sally,

I am enchanted by your poems of nature and wonders of nature. The Northern Lights are a divine celestial spectacle to see. I have only seen a glimpse here in PA, and it was if someone put up shimmering magenta colored electric curtains in the sky. The event lasted about three minutes. That was a mystifying life-long memory. I have a friend who teaches in Alaska and she see them often. There are not enough beautiful words to describe your poem. I loved it tremendously! This one is for you!

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Old 06-22-2007, 03:31 PM
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Sally,

Vivid
watching with you
dawn to dusk escapade
waxing then waning through day
with you!

See you inspired the fastest cinquain I've ever written!

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Thanks for giving me a glimpse of your sky!

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Old 06-22-2007, 03:53 PM
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Kim:

Thanks so very much for your warmest comments. After I read them I saw that WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL pic of the northern lights. Cool beans!!!!! It really makes the poem come to life!! Thanks so much hon for adding the coolest pic ever! What a joyous treat.


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I am glad I could inspire you. I LOVED you Cinquain!! Lovely beyond compare! Thanks!

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Wow, I really enjoyed this piece>
Great rhyme & Theme~~!
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