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Old 05-17-2008, 07:44 PM
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Dawning Mist
Dawning mist
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The mist of the reddish gold sunrise
Is a lingering trail of white wet smoke
As the rose-gold blaze tender, sheer
Meets the old oak tree at dawns early light
~
Its ancient spirits whispers in the mist
Every crinkle, scar, crease and lifeline
Was etched by wind, rain and snow
Throughout the epoch of significant time
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Withdrawn from the concerns of men
The ancient oak reaches to heaven, setting itself apart
Its lifeline mocks my own evanescent span of life
Oh! how its beauty awakens my heart and soul
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Old 05-23-2008, 12:39 PM
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Very vivid visuals and images Tom.
This is really beautiful!
Magnificant write...I love it and
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Old 05-23-2008, 02:33 PM
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Thank you so much my sweet Moonchild for your magnificent comments and for reading and enjoying this and all my poems
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I agree, very descriptive and uplifting. Enjoyed.
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G'day Bear...
A nice written picture. And isn't dawn a beaut time of the day. Yes, taking the time to muse over a majestic tree does bring up questions. If only that old Oak could speak, what yarns it could tell.

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Thank you very much Terence for your wonderful comment
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Thank you so much mountainpepper for your wonderful comment and yes if only that mighty oak could talk the stories it would tell
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It's sparse time here
shows it's reverence
over all, each mark
recording more then
any of us could ever
know.

Is each oak, pine,
spruce the creators
secret hand book,
of the happenings
here on this earth?

Enjoyed your write as it
makes me think of new
questions.

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Bear this is an eternally lovely piece, more so because it shows us the beauty of nature and its majestic story being told each and every day by our God, with every new growth keeping and marking time with the earth and its inhabitants. I feel the same about about the mountains that never cease, generation after generation...solidly remaining as sentries...reminding us that some things are fleeting yes, but some things last forever...and that there is a forever..

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Thank you so much Nomad I truly appreciate your comment aand I think we think alike
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thank you so much Abae its great to seek answers to those questions and I appreciate your comments
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