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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 04-27-2008, 12:05 AM
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Daydream Star

Beams of light
through branches shine
a kaleidoscope cross
lights a daydream,
a charm to curiosity.

Nature’s toy,
a gift to ponder
distracts desperation
pacifies tired eyes.

Silence takes stage,
daylight sends invitation
to stars lost in blue skies,
pressed into responsibilities
that steal loves loyalty.

Hours to shine wait
for obeisance to sun’s applauds,
and mountains rise
to meet her exit act.



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I love the images in this Jolie.
Magical and enchanting.
I like how you made like a play out of it.
Very creative! A great read, well done!



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