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Old 01-04-2007, 04:28 PM
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silken wind flows through curtains
wrapping the ocean's voice 'round your face
breathing kisses across your smile



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ncie poem zaac I expeected a tropical setting as well wish their was but it can be imagined



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Dear Isaac,

Simply beautiful, as you already know how I feel about this poem.

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A beautiful poem, great imagery and well-written but has too many syllables to be called haiku. I know that haiku comes in many shapes and forms but all have 17 syllables or less.



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ok...ok....
excuse my stupidity or naivete or however you choose to describe it lol. I was under the misguided impression that it was 5 words 7 words 5 words...not syllables damnit.

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